Ezine Advertising

Solo Ads: 9 Tips for Writing Better Subject Lines

March 8th, 2010

Solo ads are an effective marketing vehicle but for many advertisers is just another unintentional way of throwing away some money. Most of the people don’t like ads and no one is waiting for your ad. That’s a general advertising truth. If you want your ad to be read and more than this – some kind of action to be taken after reading it – then you have two choices: pay a copywriter or take this activity seriously and spend more time on it. Today’s article deals with the most important part of a solo advert: the subject line.

Tip # 1 – Always remember the truth I just mentioned: the most important part of an email marketing message is the subject line. That piece of text is decisive. If all it says is something like “Delete this junk!”, then the rest is in vain. Your work and your money are wasted. Unfortunately so many advertisers think that buying a solo ad slot in an opt-in mailing list guarantees some kind of readership for their advertisement or otherwise it means that the publisher is some sort of scammer. That’s completely wrong! In order to get a good result, the first thing your ad needs (out of many others) is a good subject line.

Tip # 2 – Write an attention grabbing subject line. Common pieces of text like “It’s Ken here” (as if the reader knows who Ken is – she/he doesn’t!) don’t work. People don’t read all the emails they receive, but only the emails they have some of sort of interest in or the emails that arouse their curiosity.

Tip # 3 – Don’t grab the reader’s attention in a wrong way. Swearing, for example, for sure grabs the reader’s attention, but it makes her or him delete your ad instead of reading it.

“What kind of tip is this? No one will swear anyway.”

Well, claiming something even the advertiser doesn’t believe is common and is actually like swearing. Insulting reader’s intelligence is the no-no method I’m actually advising you to avoid.

Tip # 4 – Keep the subject line short. In some email clients, long subject lines are not readable without opening the email. Since many emails are opened only if the subject line is interesting, in case the subject line is not fully readable, you know what happens, right? How short should it be? If you make it very short (30-35 characters) it will be good for almost all email clients, but you may not be able to write an interesting subject line using so few characters. My recommendation is maximum 60 characters.

Tip # 5 – Write the subject line so that you can have the keywords very close to its beginning. If the subject line is not fully readable without opening the email and the keyword is at the end of the line … you know the outcome.

Tip # 6 – Ask the publisher not to personalize the subject line. Reader’s first name will “eat” characters from the visible part of the subject line. The longer the first name, the shorter the visible subject line. On the other hand, spammers already use first names too, and as a consequence more and more people are no longer naive. Their first name in the subject line doesn’t make them automatically open the email anymore.

Tip # 7 – Refrain from claiming big earnings. Within seconds the reader may say … “I don’t believe her/him”. It doesn’t matter if she or he is wrong. The result is that your advert is deleted.

Tip # 8 – Write more subject lines and test them in order to see which one works better. It’s hard to write the best headline from the very beginning. Be your first critic and then ask your friends what subject line they like.

Tip # 9 – Test the sujbect line (together with the whole ad copy) in order to be sure that it doesn’t trigger the spam filters. If these filters block your ad or send it to readers’ spam folders, all your work is ruined. Don’t let this work on publisher’s shoulders. Most of them don’t have a clue on how to deal with spam filters even if some of them are very good publishers. Don’t take this risk!

To Your Success!
Adrian Jock

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P.P.S. Recommended reading: Ultimate Guide to Solo Ads

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