For today here are some copywriting tips that will improve the results of your advertising campaigns.
1) Don’t exaggerate.
People are more and more educated and they stopped believing hypes like … you’ve earned tons of money with the help of a certain program that you’ve just joined five minutes ago.
All hype does is to tell the reader to skip your ad and read the next one.
2) Don’t tell what is NOT the program/product you advertise.
The reader doesn’t care what isn’t the program/product you advertise.
When a salesman is in front of you and talks about a product you’re interested to buy, what do you prefer to hear?
“With the help of this product you cannot do this, you cannot do that …” and so on?
Or “With the help of this product you can do this, you can do that …”
It’s elementary!
3) Use wisely the limited space you have for your ad.
Don’t waste the advertising space by telling the people to click on a certain link or to visit your website.
I have to tell you again …
People are more and more educated and they know what a link is for. If they want to visit your website, they know that they have to click on that link.
You don’t need to waste the space by telling them.
During the last weeks I’ve noticed a certain buzz around 1on40. People discuss about it on forums, people purchase ezine ads for promoting them …
Let’s see what they promise:
Promise # 1: “Our service will submit and GET the NUMBER ONE position for any other type of web site on the TOP 40 top engines within 120 days”
Promise # 2: “Once at NUMBER ONE position we will leave YOUR web site there for 7 days to prove our ground breaking service.”
Now let’s do a simple math …
Suppose that today 19 people join and all of them compete for the SAME keyword.
1on40 promised that each site will remain as No. 1 for 7 days.
7 days each website x 18 websites = 126 days. This means that the 19th website is outside the 120 days deadline.
I can continue showing other examples of situations that may occur … but it doesn’t make any sense. If you do the math you see that not even Google can do what they promise unless the math is changed
Or it may be another explanation: 1on40 staff doesn’t know what Number One means. Maybe by Number One they understand the first 100 positions, or 1,000 positions
Now answer yourself to the question from the title!